Composition # 3 Draft # 3

Sabina Yesmin

Composition # 3

Draft # 3

Letter to the mayor.

Dear mayor Bloomberg, don’t you think is important to have more shelter house in our city? I think you should consider it, because a shelter house is really promising to our city. This is an important dissection because building a shelter house we need lots of money which only you have right to do. Building a homeless shelter is beneficial for New York City because it will provide job improvement, community education, and would be better for the environment.

Building a homeless shelter is good for New York City because it will increase jobs. First of all, a homeless shelter can provide an opportunity for construction workers. In order to build the shelter we will need to hire different workers. We need carpenters, engineers, plumbers, electricians and painters. Currently the unemployment rate is very high. Hiring people to build the shelter is going to lower unemployment. Secondly, there are some homeless who need help from social workers like old people need support from the city. After finishing school, social workers will have a chance to find employment working in the shelter. And some people have children physical problem which is social worker can help. Finally, building a homeless shelter will help to give a chance for doctors and nurses to work. Homeless people need medical attention, so doctors and nurses can get jobs in the shelter house to take care the special person who they have moving problem, so they can have in the shelter house job. A homeless shelter provides many different jobs.

Building a homeless shelter would be helpful for homeless peoples’ education. First of all, twenty percent of homeless people are illiterate in New York City. The homeless need to be taught how to read and write. The homeless people could get those abilities in shelters through study programs like reading groups. This is going to be beneficial to the city because homeless people could get a better job. After they have finished their study they could get job in city or in any private place. Reason is, they will have qualifications to seeking for job. Secondly, a homeless shelter could encourage homeless people to improve their job skills and they could learn manual labor like carpentry or sewing when they finished their education. They will able to find more professional job which way they can make more money. Thirdly, reducing homeless is also depends on our education. If we have to focus on this situation. We really have to think about those people who are surviving on the street. When homeless people have the proper education, they will have good money paying job and that’s the way they will afford their living. And we can reduce the homeless from the city.

Also shelter house is helpful for our environment. When they get house to live, they will get trained by people shelter house how to maintain the house and keep the street clean like throwing the garbage in the right place. First of all, it will keep clean the street from the shabbiness. When homeless people live on the street they used the street as garbage dump. They will know how to live in proper way when they get the shelter house. Secondly, shelter house will be an example for other community people. Other community people will know to keep clean the environment. If you make the shelter house for homeless people, they will learn to stay in the house and uses of the house. So other community people will try to do the same shelter house and that will be an example for other community. Thirdly, this is the opportunity to maintain our environment clean in New York City. A shelter house is one of the impotent matter because the environment depends on homeless people because they makes the street shabby by throwing their used closes and leftover food. Also they urinate on the street and try to spend their life on the street. So that’s make the environment dirty and odor. So shelter house is the best way to support homeless people and maintain the environment clean.

I think a homeless shelter will be the best choice for our city and it will make our life safety and healthy. This is really important for our future generations. My request to you is to is think about this homeless shelter situation. We will be happy with your decision.

Composition # 2 Draft # 3

Sabina Yesmin

Composition # 2

Draft # 3

Biography.

My name is Sabina Yesmin and I am from Bangladesh. I was born and raised in one of the biggest cities, Komilla. I have nice family. Before I came to America there were eight family members. When I was in my middle school my parents wanted to move to the capital city Dhaka because my all siblings were moved there. But my Grandma didn’t want to move from there. She told us that if she moves from there she will miss my grandpa more because she used to love him so much. Also that was my great parent’s house and we had to live there. After two years, my grandma died. Then my parents moved out of the city. At that time I was in high school. But my parents felt bad when they had to move from that city because they had been living there thirty years. I also liked it because I grew up there and it’s a very quiet place.

I have a really big family, and we were four sisters and two brothers. We were very friendly but my oldest brother was little different. And four of them used to scare of him because the way he talked they thought he is upset. I was never scared of him, but I respected him. He never showed them angry attitude like yell out at them that they have to afraid of him, but they didn’t know why they have scared and whenever they saw him they start to ran one room to another room. But I think that’s respect. My three sisters are married. They got married when they finished their graduation. My sisters marriages were settle marriage. In my country you can chose one boy you like but your parents has have permeation to get married. So their marriage was settled by my parents. My father has dreamed about us to make us well educated and give us better future. I think so far he did .One of my brother is doctor. My oldest brother is a businessman and they are successful

After my sister got married, I and my two brothers were living with my parents. We had a party every Friday because Friday is the day when we don’t have to go to work like weekend in America. The party was for whole day for breakfast, lunch and dinner. My sisters came with their family and sometimes we had to go their house. My father was businessman and my mom was a housewife. They were very strict about our life during our study time they sat with us and watch us to finish our homework. And used to ask us how we were doing in the school did we give our home work to teacher and what was our grad. They always wanted us to complete our study. Also they were very liberal. They never forced us to do study too much they wanted. The only thing they were wanted us that we have to finish study and achieve our goal. My younger brother is very friendly with me. My all siblings were behaved polite with me because I was the youngest one. They thought mom and dad loved me most. That was true because they really loved me. But my parents loved them too.

My neighborhood was very big. It’s in the city. I had couple of friends who lived close to my house. So I had lots of fun to chat with them at the evening time. Also one of my sisters was living two blocks away from my mom house. So during the week days I stayed at my sister house and on the weekends I stayed with my mom. And I am so attached to my sister because she used to love me more than my other sisters.

My house was beautiful looking and inside was very peaceful because my parents were cool personality they never fought. Inside the house my room was my favorite place. I decorated my room way I liked. I chose the paint, furniture for my room. When I had to stay in my house, my two brothers, my parents and me had to have dinner together. That was the most important time in my life for now when I think about it because when I got married after six month I lost my dad so I can’t have those days again.

After I got married my husband became the important person in my life. He is quite friendly and bossy he is like to see me I listen to him all the time and he don’t want me to argue with him. Also he listen to me as well. When I finished my high school graduation in Bangladesh then we met. I didn’t know him before I got married .It was settle marriage too. When I got married I had to move to America because he was living here before we got married. I didn’t feel too good but it was ok I have to think about my family life that’s why I had to come to America. After I came here five years later I had one boy. Now these days he is my most important person.

When I came to America I had a dream to finish my studies. But I haven’t had a chance to do that before now because we had to move from New York to Georgia one of the state USA in the south for business purpose. My husband wanted me to study. So I started to think about my plan that I wanted to study. Now I am at the CLIP program I think which is going to help me to accomplish my dream. CLIP is the most reliable study program I have ever seen in my life. I am saying that because I am learning grammar, reading, writing and speaking together. My dream is to be become a nurse. I like to help people and serve people who ever need helps. I know I have to do lot of work about this because first of all I have to take care of my family and my baby also my study. So I have set my mind that I have to finish my study. And take care of my family too.