Composition # 6 Draft # 3

Sabina Yesmin

Composition # 6

Draft # 3

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Dear Mayor,

I have heard that you received a large donation. And you trying to make decision between two options one is improve the school in the bad neighborhood and another one is improve the quality of the neighborhood near tourist action. Don’t you think this is very important to improve the school in the bad neighborhood,? I believe that this is will be very promising to our city. We need to be careful about the neighborhood school because it will really make our education, economy and up coming program profitable in the future.

The neighborhood always depends on our city education. If the education system is better in the society, the neighbors must be polite and organized. First of all, schools have to have better teachers. If the school has better teachers than school will have strict rules. Students have to fallow the rules, that way they can’t escape from the school. Also they will have to finish their homework and they have to show that next day to school which will keep them busy to study. That way neighborhood will be polite. Secondly, in the school, if they have after school education system that will be better choice for the students and for the neighborhood. If after school, students has to stay for two to three hours more in the school that way they could finish their homework. This is also good effect for neighborhood because as long as stay at the school neighbors will be polite they are not going to have time to make unnecessary friends or talk on the street. So for the students it is really helpful for future study improve and it will effect on our education and which is related with neighborhood.

A bad neighborhood is also bad influence for the economy. First, when the people don’t work, they have to depends on the city shelter for food and shelter house which is effect on city economy. If the neighborhood has a good school, the parents will think about their children better future and they will try to send their children to school. When more and more students will go to school they will be educated and in the future they can and get jobs place which will help the country. Second, getting a job is one of the main problem to make bad neighborhood because when the people don’t have jobs they can make the family members worst. Whoever doesn’t have a job they are frustrated and make the family in a fight situation . If the people study and become educated, they can have good job. That way the people will be able to keep their family peace. Also that will be good influence for the neighborhood.

If we have some new program in the school which will help the neighborhood students. First of all if the school has new computer and the students are allow to do their research and home work in the school. Who doesn’t have computer in the home, and if they can do that in the school that will make the students more brighter and they can stay long in the schools and everybody will be encourage to go to school. Secondly, art is one of the program which is also keep the students busy at the schools. It is also impotent for the students to achieve their goal because they can spent more time in the school instant of spent extra time with friends. That way students will be inspire to study more and neighborhood will be quite and everybody will be busy with their work which is going to make the neighborhood better.

So our request to dear mayor is to think about the situation which is really improve the neighborhood because it will improve our upcoming program economy and education better you are the one who can think about the situation. I think that will improve our city condition too.

Thank you.